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雅思大作文素材积累之帮助别人

2019-04-20 01:05dgukedu 未知

  雅思大作文题目中给出的观点我们不能帮助世界上所有需要帮助的人,所以我们只应该关心我们自己的社区和国家;考生需要表达自己的观点与看法。接下来小编为大家带来关于这个题目的范文,供大家参考。

  题目:

  We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

  范文:

  Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.

  On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity.

  At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area.

  In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need.

  (280 words, band 9)

  建议大家重点参考范文的解题思路、高分句式等,结合写作练习熟练掌握与运用到自己的答题中。

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